tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5510942428845489749.post519822932675844881..comments2012-02-25T17:23:04.369-08:00Comments on luis's blog: Treatmentluisiosomvhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00472739284883776615noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5510942428845489749.post-44270475208616924422009-10-28T16:50:43.249-07:002009-10-28T16:50:43.249-07:00Luis, your story starts off good but the ending do...Luis, your story starts off good but the ending doesn't make sence. What does the smae eyes as the mom have anything to do with the girls eyes? Yes, i know they are the same but that part just makes the audience confused like if the women was the mom on the inside or something. Also, at the end why would you see the women with her husband, that part doesn't make sence. Was the women already married when she kissed him or did she get married later. If the women and her husband went on vacation, why did she have the man's belongings? i don't if you were going to add to this but i think you should and explain the ending a little bit more.Edgar!https://www.blogger.com/profile/10324657161858980188noreply@blogger.com